Comments and feedback about programme analysis:
"Good analysis of narrative structure, well set out, confident detail of characters. Use more terminology to improve it."
"Could use more terminology to add to points. Good links to theories. Mixed up words of antagonists and protagonists. Good mix of images and text."
"Good images and detailed analysis, however could've mentioned camera shots and sound."
"Develop points of Field Act Structure."
"Nice range of images but need to develop the information. Good clear writing, well presented. Good detailed character descriptions."
From these comments I can take that the character roles and descriptions were fairly well analysed in our work, and we had a good presentation broken up by a good range of images. We had a good analysis of narrative structure, however needs developing more, possibly with more detailed description and a lot more use of terminology, without getting the terminology mixed up. We could've made the bulk of the information less brief.
I will take this on board to help aid my future work and help me to improve it, as well as my general skills :)
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